“Cotton Candy” by Edward Hirsch

CCSS.ELA-Literacy.CCRA.R.7. Integrate and evaluate content presented in diverse media and formats, including visually and quantitatively, as well as in words.

CCSS.ELA-Literacy.CCRA.SL.2. Integrate and evaluate information presented in diverse media and formats, including visually, quantitatively, and orally.

Before you start these activities, please ask your students to bring in a photograph of a time they spent with a grandparent or older person who is important to them.

• Poem at the Academy of American Poets website: “Cotton Candy”
• Background on the poet at the Academy of American Poets website: Edward Hirsch
• Incredible Bridges: Poets Creating Community, “Cotton Candy” by Edward Hirsch version of this lesson is available from the Academy of American Poets

Activity 1. Sharing Special Moments

Objectives: Students will share special moments verbally and in writing, then peer edit them to construct a list of vivid descriptive words.

• Tell your students that you will go around to each member of the class quickly, asking them to share verbally, in no more than one or two sentences, the special moment they have with a grandparent or older person in the photograph. [Note: If someone does not have a photograph, they can work from memory—a somewhat different experience. They also have the option to simply say “pass” and you can go back to them later.]
• Ask your students to write a paragraph about the photograph/memory they just shared with the class, using as much sensory detail as they can. Remind them that this means they should use words to describe what they see and remember about the sights, smells, sounds, and, perhaps, tastes of the time they shared with their special older person.
• In pairs, ask each student to read her paragraph to her partner. The partner should try to see the moment in her “mind’s eye.” Based on what they imagine from the paragraph the listener should tell her partner what other information she needs in order to see the special moment more clearly. Not only should the writer verbally answer specific questions to make the descriptive paragraph more vivid, she should make appropriate changes to her paragraph based on what she learns from the conversation.
• After this process is complete, the partners should switch roles, so the second student in the pair can receive feedback.
• Ask for student volunteers to read their descriptive paragraphs to the class. After each student presents, ask the class to recount the vivid words and phrases in the paragraph. Record their answers on the front board.

Activity 2. Reading Hirsch’s Poem “Cotton Candy”

Objective: Students will complete a close reading of the poem “Cotton Candy” by Edward Hirsch, paying attention to its poetic structure.

• Project the poem “Cotton Candy” from poets.org
• Ask your students to read the poem silently. As they read, they should write down phrases, images, and words that jump out at them. This includes words and phrases they might not know.
• Ask one student to read the poem aloud to the class, followed by a second reader. Remind them to pay attention to the line breaks in the poem as slight pauses, a little less than what they would do at the end of a sentence. While they are reading, the other students should be listening for new and different things that jump out at them, as they hear the poem read.

Vocabulary: Have your students keep a running list on the front board of the words they have read and heard that they do not understand. You can either conduct a separate vocabulary lesson about these words during which students try to figure out their meaning from context and connections or review the vocabulary as you progress through the other activities.

Activity 3. Watching Edward Hirsch Read “Cotton Candy”

Objective: Students will notice the difference between reading a poem on a page and experiencing a poet reading his poem.

• Tell your students that when they watch the video, they will record what they notice when Edward Hirsch reads his poem. Ask them to pay close attention to the sounds of the words as the poet reads them. Do they hear repetitions? Do they hear any particular sound more than others? What else do they notice? Make sure they record their new perceptions with their other notes.
• Show the video of Edward Hirsch reading his poem.
• Ask your students to work with a partner to share what they have noticed. They should discuss what they think Edward Hirsch did in his poem to make us see the moment “in our mind’s eye.” They should refer to their perceptions of the written poem and the video as they think about this, as well as their earlier discussion of vivid language. (Activity 1.) 

Activity 4. Small-Group Work on “Cotton Candy”

Objective: Students will use their synthesis of details from the poem to create shared meaning based on evidence.

• Ask each pair of students from Activity 1 to find two other pairs with whom to work. Based on their previous work in pairs, ask each group of six to create a shared list of vivid details in the poem. Tell them that one person in each group will report their list to the whole class.

Activity 5. Whole-Class Discussion of “Cotton Candy”

Objective: Students will glean meaning from poetic structure and content.

• Hold a whole-class discussion, starting with what your students have noticed in the poem, and moving from there to what they think the poem is saying.
• Ask each group representative to report the details their group has noticed. Make sure they talk about the sounds in the poem, as well as its content. Place these details on the board. If the later reporting groups have duplicates of what has been said, simply put a check next to the detail for each repetition. At the end of the reporting session, circle the details with the most checks.
• What sounds seem to be repeated in the poem?
• How does the sound “rrrr” make them feel? (See EDSITEment Literary Glossary for a definition of consonance.)

• Discuss Hirsch’s use of imagery in the poem (See EDSITEment Literary Glossary for a definition of imagery.)

• Explain how cotton candy acts as a metaphor in the poem.

• What does Hirsch initially compare it to?
• How does Hirsch then extend this metaphor of cotton candy even further? Why? (See EDSITEment Literary Glossary for a definition of metaphor and extended metaphor.)
• What does the image of cotton candy tell us about the relationship between Hirsch and his grandfather?

• Explain how the bridge acts as a metaphor in the poem.
  • What does Hirsch compare to the bridge cables?
  • How does Hirsch then extend this metaphor of the bridge further?
  • What does the image of a bridge tell us about the relationship between people and place as well as people and time?

• What does this poem tell us literally through its words? What does this poem tell us figuratively through the connections we can make beyond the words?

Based on the paragraphs your students wrote about their moment with an older person, ask them to write a poem of their own, using vivid language to describe the moment.

Encourage them to incorporate vivid language, imagery, and different types of figurative language into their poems. Suggestions:

• Make connections that might turn into metaphors
• Use line breaks to emphasize important thoughts and images in their poems
• Include “sound” devices such as consonance to help them emphasize the meaning “beyond the words”

With your students, develop an evaluation tool for their work using the terms exemplary, proficient, developing, and basic. What, for example do they (and you) think are the characteristics of an exemplary poem that uses vivid language? A proficient one? One that is developing or basic? You may want to prompt them to do the same kind of evaluation for their use of metaphors and repetition of sound.

• Collect your students’ poems into an anthology, which you can share with a local senior citizen center, as well as with the school community. Your students can also volunteer to give a reading of their work at the senior center.

• If there are grandparents who came from “old countries” and live nearby, ask two or three to come to your class to share their stories of growing up in their particular communities. Ask them if they would like to discuss their reasons for coming to the United States?

• Lead a discussion (or have students write an essay) on the role of nostalgia in this poem and in their lives. To start things off, you may want to give or read a few preliminary examples to relay the meaning of nostalgia.

• What does nostalgia mean? How is it different from simply remembering?
• What action and/or sensory details in the poem spur this feeling of nostalgia?
• How important is sensory detail in nostalgia?

(Have them reflect back to Activity 1, where they brought in a photograph of a time they spent with a grandparent or older person who is important to them.)

• How does this feeling of nostalgia affect their recollections of their elders?